RESEARCH PROPOSAL

I just got back my research proposal response and it was really really helpful. There were things that she pointed out that I didn't even realize or think to realize. Because I already knew so much about the topic I just assumed that others would as well. I think I need to make some more clarifications when I talk about linking service learning to leadership. I also need to explain myself without jumping to conclusion. Ms. Scott also brought up a good point about my organization, after rereading it I realized rearranging some stuff my make things more clear for the reader. Lastly, grammer. I am horrible at grammer and need to look at that once again.