I am currently revising my "shitty first draft", and i've decided that the part that i need to work most on are my transitions. I have my ideas out there, I just need to sort them out. Right now it's just a bunch of jumbled thoughts on my paper, and I'm attempting to make it a little more organized so it makes sense to the audience.
I think the biggest risk I am taking now is that my essay constantly evolves from begining to end. The idea I present in the introduction completely shifts and changes in the conclusion. Not only are the arguments different but the topic shift a little as well. Hopefully it'll work out! Also my community isn't brought up as much in my essay
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